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so then there might be something that says ¡°
<div class=WordSection1>¡± just please ignore it, and
im sorry if the spacing is all awkward, ive never uploaded any writing. I¡¯ll
try to fix this so Thank you for understanding!



then they-a lived happily ever-a after" and with that your papa((Italy))
closed the book that he finished reading and put it away back into its place in
the shelf. You where adopted, and yet only five so you really had no idea who
your real 'papa' is/was. "So papa, what are we going to do tomorrow?"
you asked, you where always curious about what would happen next, only a few
seconds later he said "Ve~ it's-a going to be a ve-" with that he
stopped, not wanting to tell that she would be sent away to a new family.
"What is it going to be like papa?"  asked then he looked at the
clock and said back "Its-a time to go to-a bed" and with that he
tucked you into bed, kissed your forehead, and left the room closing the door
before walking to his own room. "Ti Amo......___name___"


TimeSkip to the morning~

___name___ wake-a up! We-a have to go" Italy said to you "Go where
papa?" you asked, an without warning Italy grabbed you and went to the
car. Once you where in the car, you noticed luggage in the back and wondered
where you where going to go.


at Finland's house~

does this look Better or this?" then Sweden put a hand on Finland's
shoulder "d'nt  ((don't worry))" "But what if the little
girl do-" Denmark butted in and said "Finny! The plane's ready! Let's
go see the little girl!" "Ja let's get going, it won't be good if we
get there late" said Norway, and Iceland was already waiting to go meet
the five year old girl, well everyone was excited and yet nervous.


an hour or two later you where at the 'office' building, clueless "Where
is this place papa?" you asked and he replied back "Ve~ Its a place
where-a your going to meet new people" "N-New P-People?" but
just then the Nordics came in the room, which made you hide behind Italy's


saw four blond men, and a younger looking boy/man who had silver hair. You
stared at the five, confused, very confused. Italy walked over to the shortest
man, and whispered so only hear "Ve~ Tino, grazie. But-a be aware, she
doesn't know that-a we are countries ve~" then your papa came back and
hugged you and the shortest man told the other four what Italy has told him.


bent down to your hight "Ve _n-name__? Can you-a promise me-a
something?" you nodded a yes "c-can you-a stay with these-a four
people for a while __name__" "but will you be back" you asked
Italy, he said nothing for a minute until he suddenly said "Ti Amo
__name__" and with those words he left the luggages with the 5 men, and


Finland took one
of your luggage, while Sweden too the other one. Norway, Iceland, and Denmark
followed Finland and Sweden with out saying a word.

XDDD So then my first fanfic yay //shot

So then im thinking about making a series of it :iconshrugsplz: so vote?

And also Happy Valentines day!
Also I am sorry if my grammar and other things are not correct ((XD Because Im not America, Im Asian, well Korean ))
And That there's some awkward writing code, OTL Ive never done anything like this. AND The spacing ; w ; im sorry

And Im sorry that this is short, I promise if people like it and want me to write more, I'll try and make then longer

Hetalia(c) Hima
You (c) Yourself, for now

Chapter1: You are here
Chapter2: [link]
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PrimEverdeen Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
:iconstunplz: More please! If it shan't trouble you.
EmiThePandaCooki3 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
:iconstunplz: Yes Sir

And no it doesnt
ikutolovins58 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Filmographer
Some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing i couldn't understand. I hope you can continue this it was really interesting!
EmiThePandaCooki3 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
^^; Im sorry for the grammar mistakes. And I shall continue it.
ChibiPenny Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ChibiPenny Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ChibiPenny Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MORE.....nuff said
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